deer crossing fences with force of honeysuckle likewise passing boundaries as speaking instantly thru marsh iris define a new border/ about time (more than) that ground level zoning give way to cloud cluster scatter gram, jet vapors comic cross hatch of streaking straight lines/ like deer we bend to a new world where borders their absence startle more than deer lunching their path thru supposed private lanes
A perfect match, Ms.M: your own eye for beauty and Anon's perfect poetry. I had to read that aloud, slowly, over and over; such concision, yet every word feels like an adventure in itself, and all in perfect harmony with your photographs.
Petrea: Thank you. Anon and I make a pretty good team, most of the time :-) This deer was young and very intent on snacking; it didn't seem that afraid of us.
Margaret: We often see wonderful, unusual things during our walks. I always pack a camera, just in case.
8 comments:
deer crossing fences with force
of honeysuckle
likewise
passing boundaries
as speaking instantly thru marsh
iris define a
new border/
about time (more than)
that ground
level zoning give
way to cloud
cluster scatter
gram, jet
vapors comic
cross
hatch of streaking
straight lines/
like deer we bend
to a new
world
where borders
their absence
startle
more than
deer lunching
their path thru supposed
private
lanes
A perfect match, Ms.M: your own eye for beauty and Anon's perfect poetry. I had to read that aloud, slowly, over and over; such concision, yet every word feels like an adventure in itself, and all in perfect harmony with your photographs.
Wonderful poem, Anon -- thank you xxoo
Dive: N and I both thank you. Anon writes well, don't you think? ;)
Nice pairing, Ms M and Anonymous.
I've seen deer a few times, on my hikes. I will never get used to it. They are always striking.
You have the best walks.
Petrea: Thank you. Anon and I make a pretty good team, most of the time :-) This deer was young and very intent on snacking; it didn't seem that afraid of us.
Margaret: We often see wonderful, unusual things during our walks. I always pack a camera, just in case.
What a lovely walk. I never see deer on my walks :)
Thank you, Debs. We don't see deer often; they usually stay further away in the hills.
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